Comments on: ‘In The Smoke’ Under Construction

By: Laurel

Laurel — Thu, 02 Jun 2022 02:32:25 +0000

11 years ans I still come back to see if there’s anything new. I hope whatever stopped you from writing doesn’t hold you forever.

By: Kourtney

Kourtney — Tue, 22 Apr 2014 21:43:29 +0000

Loved the book! Any ideas on when the next two will come out??? Very curious! Happy writing

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 29 Dec 2013 04:26:17 +0000

I fell in love with the story and am so excited to finish reading the series. I am a fan of Grayson and hope that Ash (as much as I like you) doesn’t win her over. I think that she made the right choice of leaving them and hopefully she can grow a little while in college and learn to speak up for herself a little more which is why I love her best friend because she helps Ellery so much. Good luck writing!! I eagerly await the completion of this book.

By: Rachel

Rachel — Sun, 14 Apr 2013 22:35:51 +0000

I absolutely love the first book and cannot wait until the next one comes out. I am really hoping she chooses Grayson. He is amazing and really knows her. I think there is a huge misunderstanding about him trying to control Ellie. She openly admits several times that he always gets it right then feels like he’s controlling her even though she has never spoken up about it bothers her. Ash seems like a creep to me. He falls in love with her even though she looks 12, buys a very expensive ring for before he even meets her. I believe he’s only “honorable” because he’s on duty most of the time. I really really hope Grayson wins in the end.

By: Margaret

Margaret — Fri, 05 Apr 2013 23:26:01 +0000

As a dedicated English fan who read these books last year. I also cannot wait for book two. However I would hate for it to be rushed and not as good therefore I am trying to be really patient.

By: Rebeckah

Rebeckah — Sat, 02 Mar 2013 06:39:04 +0000

I keep thinking about In the Spotlight and the Grayson part of it. As I have read the book 2 times now since getting it a week ago I think that possibly Gray’s father had something to do with the Grandfather. Because at the end of In the Spotlight at least on the kindle it talks about the synopsis behind In the Smoke. There it says that Gray will have to figure out between loyalty to his father and loyalty to his love. Also in Tentative Tourist Gray talks about how his father’s company is in the red, and when Ellery’s grandfather joins them in Iceland it will help bring the company back up. So I am thinking that Gray’s father wanted to company to survive so he want Grandpa’s rock collection. So as you can tell I am super excited for both of the books to come out already. Until then I am going to try and figure it out on my own and be surprised when it actually comes out.

By: Kelli

Kelli — Sun, 10 Feb 2013 06:33:35 +0000

I have been waiting FOREVER for the second book and I know the wait for the third will be just as bad! This series is too good to have to wait! I am doubly interested being a Kentucky girl myself!! Not to Be rude or impatient but please hurry!! I am a very enthusiastic fan!

By: Lee

Lee — Tue, 29 Jan 2013 22:28:31 +0000

I just read the first book and I loved it! I read it in one night because I couldn’t put it down. After finishing it at 2:00am, I immediately tried to find and download the second one! I can’t wait to read it!

By: amy

amy — Tue, 01 Jan 2013 19:47:36 +0000

Please hurry with the second book. I cant wait to see what will happen.

By: krista

krista — Tue, 23 Oct 2012 16:16:22 +0000

Please hurry and write the second book. I want to know what happens.