Comments on: 04 – Attraction

By: rebeckah

rebeckah — Sun, 24 Feb 2013 04:35:44 +0000

Wow!! to realize that he saw her and thought of her mother, however he took his time and wanted to make sure that his feelings for her were not because of the resemblance to his mom. He looked at her personality and realized it is what he loved about his mom and treasures most. Very amazing writing. I want to read this like right now.

By: Margaret

Margaret — Sat, 30 Jun 2012 10:15:32 +0000

It’s so refreshing to read a book were patience and kindness are involved in the romance. The insights to the characters are brilliant. Great writing. 5*****

By: cindy addleman

cindy addleman — Sun, 08 Apr 2012 04:59:32 +0000

I love that he is taking his time with her and does not push her for more. Love your book.

By: JKS

JKS — Sat, 25 Feb 2012 04:59:13 +0000

Love at first site is a complicated twist on words. Ellery takes Ash’s heart from “first site” and then the love is constantly reaffirmed.

By: Ginny Alward

Ginny Alward — Sun, 25 Sep 2011 23:09:51 +0000

I like the idea that Ash knows that Ellery is his job and a “minor” I was wondering that they don’t know what her illness is and that she was kidnapped?

By: reader

reader — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 05:32:56 +0000

In response to Ally’s comment, my mother died 5 years ago, and already my memories are starting to blur and fade. 18 years is more than enough time for reminiscing on a person’s positive qualities until you idealize them and, in your mind, make them flawless.

By: Amy

Amy — Mon, 06 Jun 2011 16:12:33 +0000

I think it was love at first sight- this chapter just seems to be explaining how his attraction fits into his life experience.

By: Brandi

Brandi — Sat, 28 May 2011 22:38:50 +0000

I think we tend to idealize people we lose tragically especially if that person is a parent. The chapter is a good look in to his character.

By: Ally

Ally — Tue, 26 Apr 2011 02:48:32 +0000

I love how he’s basically like, “Yea, okay, but she’s a minor and she’s earning me a living.” I think it’s smart of him not to lose sight of the appropriate thing (:)), but I think that the sainthood of his mother is a little far-fetched, even if he has lived 18 years without her.

By: Enjoli

Enjoli — Fri, 25 Feb 2011 02:41:13 +0000

Okay I knowfor a fact that Ash said in In The Spotlight that it was love at first sight. How come it seems that it took more than one look to fall in love with Ellery? He had to grow into that love so he kind of lied to Ellery, right?